Friday, December 16, 2011

A cold morning

My walk takes me
past sleeping dogs
curled into commas
against the cold
while young pups
are up and about
exploring the world.

8 comments:

  1. I'm definitely a comma. :) Though it's still not anywhere near cold here.

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  2. @Banno: I can get up early but then I do need to be 'commatose' later in the day:)

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  3. 'curled into commas' - nice one, that.

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  4. @dipika: That's what they looked like!!! Thanks.

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  5. Very nice!! It's very cold here today and the dogs at home are curled into commas too :) My cat has disappeared under a thick quilt :)

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  6. Love this, and the other poem on this page. So spare. =)

    Srin

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