Friday, December 16, 2011

A cold morning

My walk takes me
past sleeping dogs
curled into commas
against the cold
while young pups
are up and about
exploring the world.


Banno said...

I'm definitely a comma. :) Though it's still not anywhere near cold here.

dipali said...

@Banno: I can get up early but then I do need to be 'commatose' later in the day:)

dipikasingh said...

'curled into commas' - nice one, that.

dipali said...

@dipika: That's what they looked like!!! Thanks.

SUR NOTES said...

Nice... really nice

Anonymous said...

Very nice!! It's very cold here today and the dogs at home are curled into commas too :) My cat has disappeared under a thick quilt :)

dipali said...

@indianhomemaker, Sur: Thanks!

La Figlia Che Piange said...

Love this, and the other poem on this page. So spare. =)